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Pastures New
Contributed by
AliB
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Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 02:57:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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As each grain of sand falls
Another second passes
I rest my arms on the windowsill
Gazing out onto a tapestry
Of green fields
And clear blue skies
Under a canopy of leaves
You lay dreaming
Of the day you set sail
To pastures new
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Re: Pastures New
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 03:22:02 PM AEST
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| Very good write! Wonderfully done! |
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Re: Pastures New
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 03:45:18 PM AEST
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A beautiful calming read.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: Pastures New
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by Dawny on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 05:34:05 AM AEST
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You know, that little game of mine produced some really great poems from everyone lol
This is peaceful and calming, great imagery and flows nicely. Great poem Ali
Love Dawny x |
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Re: Pastures New
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 12:07:42 AM AEST
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lovely.
thanks for sharing |
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Re: Pastures New
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 11:33:15 PM AEST
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| nice. |
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