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One-Sided Love (To A Girl)
Contributed by
IamChrisHuff
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Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 05:09:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It feels like I'm being pushed away,
Further away from your love.
You're less loveable every day:
What's happened to my dove?
What has tried my lover so?
You've shut me off, closed the door!
When can you let me know?
Ever minute that passes, you hurt me more!
And yet, through all this hurt and pain,
I'm still longing for your love!
Become the girl you were again,
Once again be lovely, dove!
You've shunned my love, and treated me wrong.
Above me forms a darkened cloud.
One-sided love for so, so long
That now I'm slowly fading out......
Note: In the words of the great Russian poet Alexander Pushkin, "If, as I die, I love, pray let me die!" or "Let me die, but let me die loving!"
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IamChrisHuff
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2004-05-07 17:09:09]
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Re: One-Sided Love (To A Girl)
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by Archie on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 06:11:55 PM AEST
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| This is a very good poem. Your rhyming and purpose in it are perfect, and I hope things work out with you and youe girl. |
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Re: One-Sided Love (To A Girl)
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by lonely_kakashi on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 06:32:32 PM AEST
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great poem, i know the feeling, and the quote...mind blowing! nice one
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