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Now I sit here.
Contributed by
SilentPwn
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Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 06:16:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
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As darkness falls, I sit and stare.
I think of your skin.. tender and bare.
Inspire me to live creative dreams.
Keep hope when love is lost, seems...
Like I'm breaking into something unknown.
I'm learning to face my fears alone.
Propel my tears from my eyes...
Clasp my heart with your cries.
I'll be here to save you from dark
Just as I said I would start...
..To live more like I say I will.
One day, I'll sit here again, still...
Perfect as you are, never change.
Watch my heart slowly fade...
Into pitch-black shadows of the night
Useless here, hurt from fights
I cannot win a battle when you are strong.
I fall weak, I sink into the ceiling's song...
Heard from the walls that deserve better.
Babbled by fans, in a form of a letter.
Here, I have no worries.
I'll tell you my truthful stories.
I turn my emotion on high.
Droplets fall onto my eyes.
This is what I've been waiting for.
To give up before I find my core
You've asked me time and time again.
But I still wish to remain your friend.
Though I know, you've given up easy.
I'll ask you again to stay right near me.
You want more, I want less.
Let's both give up our immature regrets.
I just want you to let me be heard.
I want to let you know, I'm burned
from my emotion that lies within
In my heart, I know I'll bend
away from your ways into the skies
I'll live through the urban nights.
Now, it's over.. no way to start again.
Wake-up from this dream land.
You've screwed up this nothingness.
I deserve something you can't give.
I'm not sorry for you.
Though you are pitiful.
I'm sorry for myself and waters I've treaded.
I'm sorry for you, though, I say I'm not.
In my heart, my fears escape from a locked..
steel box, that stays with me forever.
I've broken my box with my miracle.
Pull me down into darkness..
..Where I sit now.
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2004-05-07 18:16:05]
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Re: Now I sit here.
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by Diatribe on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 07:50:40 PM AEST
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| wow that's pretty damn good... I for one hate to read but i couldn't stop... good job |
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Re: Now I sit here.
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by SilentPwn on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 08:13:23 PM AEST
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| ..Thank you, both... |
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Re: Now I sit here.
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 08:31:17 PM AEST
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Another Awesome Write SilentPwn !!!!!!!!!! Very Interesting & Enjoyable Read !!!!!!!!!!
Keep Em Coming I To Look Forward To Reading More Of Your Great Work !!!!!!!!
********LoVe**AnGeL**********
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Re: Now I sit here.
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by Randibee85 on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 09:39:47 PM AEST
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| Very epic and I really like the way you drawn things out. It's a nice touch. |
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Re: Now I sit here.
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by JennyFruFru on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 11:19:33 PM AEST
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| i really enjoy the way your poems flow... good job... :) :) :) |
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Re: Now I sit here.
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by shelby on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 10:17:38 AM AEST
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another flowing wonderful write........
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Re: Now I sit here.
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by shelby on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 10:20:24 AM AEST
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for some reason your work reminds me of someone elses alot trying to put my finger on who it is your reminding me of from here...........
Michelle |
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Re: Now I sit here.
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 11:41:04 AM AEST
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3 writes 3 good ones! you've set yourself a precedent now! well done.
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