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You Cry
Contributed by
williamdye
on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 07:56:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Obtain the blade from me shaking grip
I can not perceive
Eyes swollen with blood
Dripping to the wintry cold ground
Please thrust it deeply
Into my side
Slashing my face you cry
You thrust every ounce
Motionless I fall
Landing upon me you cry
You exert all your might
Still I have become
Stroking my bruised face you cry
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2004-05-07 19:56:32]
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Re: You Cry
(User Rating: 1 )
by SilentPwn on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 08:05:12 PM AEST
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Passion in this one. Confusing passion though. I don't fully understand it. A jumble of thoughts that seemed to be randomly placed is what I think of. It's confusing, yet good. Maybe.. if you organized your thoughts a bit more, people would understand. =]
..Nice writing style though... |
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