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Distant
Contributed by
jt
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Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 08:50:43 AM in AEST
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Distant laughter
No body, no warmth, No feeling
Distant pain
No hurt, no shame, No healing
Distant cries
No tears, no voice, I'm dealing
Distant savior
No help, not here, I'm reeling
Distant voices
Inside, locked in, The shame
Distant faces
Outside, locked out, The same
Distant thoughts
Right here, locked up, The pain
Distant thunder
Above, released, I'm drained
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2004-05-08 08:50:43]
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Re: Distant
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 08:53:56 AM AEST
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very well put together, i like this style,
well done. |
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Re: Distant
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by reprobate on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:38:23 AM AEST
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excellent,excellent piece.
thanks for sharing |
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Re: Distant
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by shanarah on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 04:34:46 PM AEST
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| attractive flow of words.. Good job! |
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