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Hollow Victory
Contributed by
jt
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Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 09:04:16 AM in AEST
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oops
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No one knows the pain inside
Hidden deep behind the eyes
Given in to all the lies
Outside it smiles, inside it cries
Past and present fleeting visions
Unreal dreams, unfair decisions
Stuck inside, head on collision
Religous wars, racial division
How is it that we don't fall apart
How can we have a finish
When we didnt have a start
How can someone claim the victory
When everyone was looking
But no one could even see
Looking up, for the truth flies
Answers won't come from the skies
All wanting to claim the prize
Ask no questions, get no lies
Scared of death as it begins
Feelings burning deep within
Hatred grows, the mortals sin
Hateful words as weapons sing
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jt
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2004-05-08 09:04:16]
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Re: Hollow Victory
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by SilentPwn on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 10:58:19 AM AEST
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| Great write. -props- |
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Re: Hollow Victory
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by reprobate on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:59:15 AM AEST
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evocative read.
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Re: Hollow Victory
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 11:36:29 PM AEST
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