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There's Only One
Contributed by
parkman
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Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 01:24:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Go for goal, achieve your aim There's only one winner, in this game Pick your spot, keep your patch There's only one loser, in this match Your face is so heavy, painted so thick There's only one way, to get your trick Your hair is so lacquered, firm and hard There's only one number, on your card Your blouse is so tight, baring your all There's only one way and it's a downward fall Your skirt is so short, baring your thighs There's only one picture and it's painted lies The final whistle blows, your game is done There's only one problem, it's for money not fun
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Re: There's Only One
(User Rating: 1 ) by starlight4215 on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 10:25:36 AM AEST (User
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People sometimes need to do certain things to survive, no matter how degrading. But if needs be, then who are we to criticise ? Excellent write as always. ~ Star x |
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Re: There's Only One
(User Rating: 1 ) by reprobate on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:56:31 AM AEST (User
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a stinging commentary on the way little has changed since the start of supposed civilization. but do you think any of our ministrations for survival will matter when the game is finally over? good write.
thanks for sharing |
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Re: There's Only One
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 01:04:05 AM AEST (User
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interesting point of view to say the least. very creative. |
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