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Death so near
Contributed by
xoblondiebabix3
on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 12:05:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Death
Fear
Cant see clear
Thoughts in head
Anger inside
To live or die
Cant decide
Broken heart
Voices in head
That wont depart
They scare instead
No need to live
With all confusion
Have friends
But see seclusion
Face so ugly
Beaty not nearer
Low self esteem
Broken mirror
Fake friends
Turned into hoes
The wrong direction
Is what they chose
Finding the right person
So hard, full of stress
Crying my heart out
With no success
Life so hard
So many tears
No laughter in me
So many fears
Death so near
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xoblondiebabix3
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2004-05-09 00:05:36]
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Re: Death so near
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by poetrygodslove on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 12:09:16 AM AEST
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applaud applaud.. nice work. nice flow. great write.
GLAD you wrote your feelings down. best thing to do when you feel this way. go hit a pillow. turn on some music. write to me hehe. anything but dont do nothing bad ok.. been there thought that. not worth it. you are here for a purpose... his purpose, find it out. wanting to hold you.. ask him. sandy |
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Re: Death so near
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by mountainhigh on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 12:15:32 AM AEST
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| I sit and read almost eveynight, not alone, but with one who waits at my side, paitently...we linger in this very site, and gain from the beautiful souls who light our night. So continue to write, but read as well, their words that will ignite, your soul to make you smile. And lead you by the hand through every mile. |
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Re: Death so near
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by SarahBelle on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 12:17:17 AM AEST
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| I am not one for dark poetry, but I really liked how you wrote this. Very much. |
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Re: Death so near
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by surfer_boy_lost on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 01:19:40 AM AEST
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| i can't believe that you captured that feeling so well, that it came and flowed with such ease. |
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