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Hateful Places
Contributed by
stormydwn
on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 01:28:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Give me another drink
Of your painful words.
Fill me with your misguided accusations.
Needles of Jealousy and Hate.
Once again I prove myself,
and once more you need
My Pain,
To make you feel alive.
Do you want my love
Or my fear?
You say you love me
more than the world.
But, I never see the world
through your eyes.
Only through my loneliness,
Only when you let me see.
And then we start this game
Again.
I wonder what you re so afraid of-
To make me feel your fear
Through you.
Maybe if you felt the Pain
That you cause,
You would see your life
dying away,
Slipping slowly past,
Like a silent movie.
Watching yourself
with my eyes.
Wanting to save yourself
From you.
Copyright ©
stormydwn
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2004-05-09 01:28:13]
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Re: Hateful Places
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by emystar on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 02:28:30 AM AEST
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I feel every word of this but he never could conquer my spirit!
That's why he's my last ex.
I live alone and I'd rather be alone and be free of his abuse!
It's obvious by reading this write that he's the one with the problem 'caus this write shows your unconditional love for him.
Great write even tho very sad.
I pray he gets some help before it's too late for him.
Luv, huggs, faith, hope, peace,
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