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Have You
Contributed by
Bree
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Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 01:30:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Have you ever had a life where nothing was right
And you wish that you could just go to the light
Right now this is how i feel
Everybody i thought i knew turned out to be the opposite
And everything i wished i had i could have, now is only a fad
Have you ever wished to a star like you were a child
Even though you knew wishing is only for children
Peole in my life say they will be here for me always and forever
But when i come to them with my problems they just turn the other way
Have you ever thought you knew why you were here
But while your doing what you thought
that thing just dissapered
Well if you have i have felt and do feel your pain
And if you haven't you have a life a head of you from which you will learn
Copyright ©
Bree
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2004-05-09 01:30:52]
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Re: Have You
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by SuperAsh16 on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 02:31:48 AM AEST
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| thank you for that wonderful poem. i enjoyed it because i felt like you were talking to me, directly. and i needed someone to tell me that. so thank you. oh and great write! ::claps:: |
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Re: Have You
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by emystar on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 02:34:56 AM AEST
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Very good write even tho sad.
I've certainly been to the place u jus discribed!
I can relate many times.
Hang tuff.
luv, huggs, prayer, faith, hope,
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