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looking for help
Contributed by
SuperAsh16
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Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 03:03:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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out of the mist
comes a half-dead kitten
limping to help
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SuperAsh16
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2004-05-09 03:03:37]
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Re: looking for help
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by BinkCaesar on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 03:10:57 AM AEST
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Caesar again,. I like this a lot, The shorter ones always grab my attention and i think about them for a long time. Again, most of the time i have no idea what i'm talking about so i'll just tell you what i thought. It seems like you dont know what you want (Thats the part i relate to), because the last line is limping to help, but the title is looking for help. Or maybe you want both. Or maybe i dont know what I'm talking about. Yep, thats probably it.
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