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This Is The Real World!!
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 07:30:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Im trying to acknowledge.
Whats going on today.
Why Im I stuck on a life.
Thats always playing games,
With my brain?
Im trying to fight back.
Gain more self-respect.
Why am I stuck here?
I cant leave this mess!
Why are you talking?
Youre booming inside my head.
Im listening to the echoes.
Theyve not quite left my head
Im woke up this morning, tired.
I dont know whats wrong with me!
Half awake, I tested a razor.
I thought it was blunt, but I was quick to bleed.
Ill keep that as my reminder.
About how mucked my head can go.
I wasnt trying to harm again.
Im not feeling quite that low!
But Im feeling pretty stressed out!
I dont know what to do, now.
Im trying to keep my head down.
Trying to heal somehow.
I want to wake up!!
And never re-live the dream.
But its a little hard, as this is reality!
Nothing is what it seems.
Some of my friends are here,
But they dont understand me!
My family says they care.
But they are breaking me!!
With all their words.
Theyre standing tall.
But Im getting crushed.
When the echoes fall
Mum dont stand up for me much!
Leaves me to fight with my life.
Then says what I do is wrong!
But theres nothing to keep me up right
I wish that she could understand me more.
And be a proper mum to me.
She acts so kind and caring.
And I love her, but she makes me scream!!!
How can I live with things,
Always bubbling inside my head?
Turn round and say Im sorry,
And act all perfect instead?
This is the real world!!
Nothing works out OK.
Problems and accruing all the time.
How can I smile when Im in pain?
Ive covered it up all this time!
You never realized how broken,
I was inside!
Well now Ive woken,
And Im not alright!
Dont tell me to behave!
Im being squeezed so tight!!
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2004-05-09 07:30:06]
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Re: This Is The Real World!!
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by bernard on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 08:28:07 AM AEST
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Many words to describe your feelings. good try
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Re: This Is The Real World!!
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by apollo on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 02:55:39 PM AEST
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this was one of the most beautiful and tragic writings i have ever heard. the way you describe your every day life is enough to make a person weep with tears until none are left. your true honesty in this poem is so truly tragic as nobody deserves to go through the sorrow that you have been accustomed to. hopefully things will change and the light will become ever brighter as your writing is wonderful and you as a person are as well.
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Re: This Is The Real World!!
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by Falloftheangels on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 04:02:40 PM AEST
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| You captured it beautifully. That IS life. You live for those moments when you fly. Dont let anyone bring you down. |
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