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Structures
Contributed by
Diatribe
on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 04:05:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Your kiss,
a fist
The foundation
of this
relation--
ship
set sail
the wind
exhales
I spin
propel
within
myself
and we
beLIEve
it lasts
untill
our dying
day
foundations
crumble
buildings
tumble
people
stumble
ships sink
and
we all make
mistakes
Copyright ©
Diatribe
... [
2004-05-09 16:05:49]
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Re: Structures
(User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 04:08:55 PM AEST
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| That is so true, your poem is well written |
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Re: Structures
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by Diatribe on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 04:17:38 PM AEST
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| WOW! I messed up here... replace the word "fist" with the word "brick"... I don't know what I was thinking! sorry... that's the original word |
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