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Suicidal Deception
Contributed by
PsychoticDreamz
on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 05:31:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Her open casket shown to the world
For all to see this beautiful girl
Taken by pain, fighting, and her hand
Her existance she could no longer stand
At the funeral, few did come to gaze
To see her where she'll forever lay
Not moving, not breathing, no loving beating heart
She tried to love, she tried to care, but no one shared their part
Lonely in this world, now to rest alone forever more
She has left all she wanted, to reach the other door
Where she thought possibly happiness was on the other side
She was so desperate and broken to find it she took her life
Now she stands still alone. Walking with those who live
Seeing her family and friends crying, With love they now wish to give
Its too late and they know it, she feels her pain return
She sits in her old room, feeling the tears that burn
She says a final goodbye and walks to her stone where she lay
Seeing the freshly dug grave, she sits waiting for the light of day
When she wakes she forgets all about it and looks ahead to see
"Here lies our baby, whom we love and need.
She took her life, though she didn't know she took our's too
We'd give anything to once again have you."
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2004-05-09 17:31:47]
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Re: Suicidal Deception
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 01:10:17 PM AEST
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| that was a very well written poem..as i commented on another poem, suicide is a very selfish act..you dont know how many lives you affect...~Kristie~ |
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Re: Suicidal Deception
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by Broken_Skin on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:30:09 AM AEST
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| Maybe we should talk |
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