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Sadistic Beauty
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
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Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 05:44:18 PM in AEST
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"Hush now," I whisper, "be silent as I make you bleed"
The crimson flows freely, fulfilling my desire and need
Upon my fingers a drop of your blood drips
And I place the sweet taste of your beauty upon my lips
I need to drink from you, I must feed
As you hurt, as you bleed
I must drag the blade gently across your skin
While I let out everything from within
Carefully, carefully I watch your pretty eyes
Cautiously, cautiously I feed you little white lies
With time the pain will fade, along with the scar
And you will return to me for more, from near or afar
Do not be afraid, I only meant to hurt you a little
(The sadist in me has never felt so beautiful)
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Re: Sadistic Beauty
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by Diatribe on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 05:50:38 PM AEST
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| great poem... i enjoyed it |
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Re: Sadistic Beauty
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 05:52:39 PM AEST
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| Beauity at it's sadistic best |
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Re: Sadistic Beauty
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 06:02:37 PM AEST
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| yeppers charlotte! lol, wonderfully dark creepy poem, vivid like watching a movie, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Sadistic Beauty
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 01:37:06 PM AEST
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Awwwww....You see beauty in your blood? I only hope that oneday my friend you see beauty in brilliant rainbows...love.....joy.....and happiness. But until then, your expression comes through loud and clear. This is a dark poem, yet rich in truth!
*I* see beauty in charlotte! Yup! It's there! :-)
Angel always...godspeed my friend...joni |
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Re: Sadistic Beauty
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by arden on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 02:24:31 PM AEST
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ohhh i almost missed this! im glad i came acrossed it.
this was friggin awesome girl. this is one of your best i think. the flow was awesome. so creepy and chilling. wow i just love it. i look forward to more like this. well done!
Becky |
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Re: Sadistic Beauty
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by ShadowDaughter on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 08:27:51 PM AEST
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Ooooh . . . chilling, vivid, and altogether enjoyable :). Nicely done; you have a huge amount of talent. My only gripe is that I wish you'd post more often!
Great job here.
--Nora |
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Re: Sadistic Beauty
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by bleeding_chains on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 01:01:22 PM AEST
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| this is a great poem, as so are the other poems by you i have read. |
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Re: Sadistic Beauty
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by blueheart on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 05:05:00 AM AEST
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| Oh wow charlotte this is amazing. The last line was so powerful, heck, the whole poem is!!! |
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