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Porcelain Doll
Contributed by
bleeding_chains
on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 11:42:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Porcelain doll
All smashed and broken
How can you still keep a smile
On your worn wooden face
After all youve been through
Where do you hide your hurt?
In the cracks of your body
The tears of your skin
The hole in your head
Porcelain doll
All chipped and cut
How can you stay so beautiful
After so many years of pain
Being thrown about
By random strangers
Being ripped apart by people you dont know
Where do you hide your fear?
In your drawn on eyes
So sky blue and shining
Behind your mask
Which was painted on
So many years ago
Where do you hide?
Copyright ©
bleeding_chains
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2004-05-10 11:42:53]
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Re: Porcelain Doll
(User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 11:57:33 AM AEST
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| wow i like the metphor in this good thinking... |
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Re: Porcelain Doll
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by SweetRhythm on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 01:09:59 PM AEST
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Intresting read & good flow of inner feelings. Catcy title. I enjoyed the capture of realism. Thanks for sharing.
.......FlawlessDumy |
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Re: Porcelain Doll
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by Gothik_Twitch on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 01:57:49 AM AEST
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| holy ***** that is so like a poem i wrote its kreepy. Guess we share the same thoughts. I love the poem2 |
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