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Weeping Colored Dreams
Contributed by
Adreana
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Monday, 7th October 2002 @ 06:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I dreamt of weeping walls
Crying away their vibrant colors
Warping the wooden floors below
With their paint filled tears
An orange eyed reptilian looked my way
Telling me to touch the walls
So I ran my fingers through colors
Dripping messily into rainbow pools
I touched my bare chest softly
With my wet, paint covered finger tips
Smearing the colors deep into my skin
And I, too, began to weep
It was then that the floor trembled
It cracked beneath my bare feet
I began my decent into nothing
Surrounded by colorful drops of life
Copyright ©
Adreana
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2002-10-07 06:30:00]
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Re: Weeping Colored Dreams
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by Phildel on
Monday, 7th October 2002 @ 06:40:27 AM AEST
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A very unique, nicely written piece, thanks for the read!!
Phildel xx |
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Re: Weeping Colored Dreams
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by Rose on
Monday, 7th October 2002 @ 07:06:50 AM AEST
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Very insightful..... good write indeed
Amber Rose :) |
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