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Cruelty of December
Contributed by
ebonystiletto
on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 04:53:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The chill, it grows
And the sky is void of light
Curling whitely, bitter cool
Muted skies of change
White.
The snow it bleeds
And I enter the hallowed field
Eden born, winter bred
Wasteland void of life
Yield.
The light, it fades
And I find the sky without a sun
Creeping clouds, waltzing dark
Solid bars of ice
Run.
The life, it fails
Petals fight
The hate
The cold
The snow
White.
Shattered flowers
Slumbered dead
The life
The will
The loss
Bled.
Skies unblue
Shades of grey
The hope
The want
The strife
Pray
They slumber
Curling tightly, winter bred
Petals dead
White.
Creeping lies
Seething hate
Murdered beauty
Hopeless fate
And they bleed on hallowed ground.
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ebonystiletto
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2004-05-10 16:53:21]
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Re: Cruelty of December
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by burdened on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 05:04:26 PM AEST
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*smile*
oh, that was so deep.
i loved every moment of it, and i loved your rhythm.
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Re: Cruelty of December
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by PumpkinPie on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 09:53:09 PM AEST
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I really liked your poetic flow in this and the one word that finished every couple of verses,it made a big impact.Very well written to say the least,~*5 stars*~
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Re: Cruelty of December
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 12:21:38 AM AEST
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| awesome style. |
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