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I watch you now
Contributed by
reilt
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Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 04:55:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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All the games we played,
The time we waste.
I watch you now,
Years older than your age,
Forgetting how I loved you
When we were younger than
Rememberance can gauge.
These lines traced,
Paths we've taken,
Ways we've strayed.
Broken hearts
Or worn them on our sleeves,
Now we're just too worn and wearied
To know what to believe.
WE've passed by one another,
Crossed each other out,
Allowed this to die,
Too busy to bother.
Consumed by resentment,
Ravaged by our jealousies
Til it ate away at what
Led us to the tendancy
To reach out and remember
All the reasons we cared,
All the reasons we're together.
I watch you now,
A different man,
Trying to hold onto that thought,
Forgetting how we've struggled,
And learning that
All is not lost
Until you've fought.
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reilt
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Re: I watch you now
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by arden on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 05:01:42 PM AEST
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this is just so sad.
a very emotional and powerful poem.
so well written.
amazing...
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