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Release
Contributed by
Killer
on
Monday, 7th October 2002 @ 07:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Darkness sweeps across this place,
A taste, a kiss, a sweet embrace.
At last I'm free from all this pain,
Of life, of love, it's all the same.
Let me go!
Release, Release, Release!
I laugh and joke, I'm doing well,
I'm really in a living hell!
Lost is hope and lost is love,
Off the cliff, no need to shove!
Let me go!
Release, Release, Release!
Emotions war inside of me,
And take away my sanity.
A broken mind, a tear stained face,
Please, Take me from this cursed place.
Let me go!
Release, Release, Release!
Help me find a deep, dark hole,
Then take away my tortured soul.
Remove the thoughts that fill my mind,
Insane, Insane, I can't unwind!
Let me go!
Release, Release, Release!
Death, take me in your arms so strong,
And lay me down where I belong,
Underneath the ground so cold.
Ever peaceful, Never old.
Let me rest!
Just let me go,
Released.
April 12/2001
Copyright ©
Killer
... [
2002-10-07 07:15:00]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Release
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 7th October 2002 @ 09:16:36 AM AEST
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Wow ... I couldn't believe how close your feelings were to my poem Daffodils. But your words are more direct and cut right through the heart.
This is exactly what I would have liked to have said. Dammit! :))))
I love it.
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Re: Release
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by Vampy on
Monday, 14th October 2002 @ 03:50:19 AM AEST
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| Wow... I love this. Wonderful poem... |
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Re: Release
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by Shanzi on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 02:28:18 PM AEST
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I really like this poem.
A lot of times I don't like rhyme or repetition, but I don't think this would work without both.
It's exactly how I feel in a lot of cases.
Awesome work! |
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