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Foreigner
Contributed by
PasserBy
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Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 06:17:57 PM in AEST
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I missed my call,
I missed the bus.
Waiting patiently for it all to happen,
The waves of feet pass over the platform.
Watching others all about,
Laughing, joking, larking around.
Then one by one they'd dissapear,
They came, they left; but were not here.
I dreamed, I wished, I hoped, I longed.
And slowly as the waves compounded me,
I realised that i missed my bus.
I never was and they never cared,
Just an outsider looking in.
I took my chance, I caught the bus.
Now I need no place.
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2004-05-10 18:17:57]
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Re: Foreigner
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by shelby on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 06:32:56 PM AEST
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very sad I understand these feelings as I recently lost someone as well but I dont want to go with them there is a lot of living to do right here where I am I hope that you find peace and some comfort from the lonliness that your feeling
Michelle |
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Re: Foreigner
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by Princesaazul16 on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 07:18:07 PM AEST
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| It's hard to lose a loved one, and I'm sorry you had to go through with that three different times. I wish you luck in all that you. And you should understand that people know what your going through. With the help of other friends, and family you can make it. Good luck. If you need to talk..i'm here -Stace- |
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