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A Stranger's Skin
Contributed by
Clarity
on
Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 06:15:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Im trying to remember where I begin;
a time before you made me wear
a strangers skin.
This tattered carcass I now bear
gives no absolution for you.
A time before you made me wear
this skin that burns me through,
and all the tears you made me cry
gives no absolution. For you
my fountain of excuses has run dry.
The scars your touch has engraved,
and all the tears you made me cry
have finally surfaced. Enraged,
soon I will be able to shed
the scars. Your touch has engraved
memories that replay in my head;
Im trying to remember where I begin;
soon I will be able to shed
a strangers skin.
Copyright ©
Clarity
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2002-07-11 06:15:13]
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Re: A Stranger's Skin
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by Chrissie on
Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 06:35:18 AM AEST
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This is wonderful, Clarity ....an excellent first attempt. The style enhances the theme of your poem. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
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Re: A Stranger's Skin
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by Clarity on
Monday, 15th July 2002 @ 10:30:01 PM AEST
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| thanx very much chrissie. i appreaciate the compliment!!! i'll probably put a few more poems up soon. |
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Re: A Stranger's Skin
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 02:04:58 PM AEST
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Fascinating... this is a really great poem. This was put together in a great way. Great job...
Jodi |
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