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fake shrubbery 110504
Contributed by
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Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 12:11:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i was laying on the beach
nightlife
feeling only the cold
and wondering
where is my mind
shimmer of silver
in the dip before the tide
a million tiny kites
soaring through liquid
simply. team peace.
bitter green grass
stumbling oblivious
in the shadows of temporary trees
counting their days
as you count thighs
hot and brown
funneling my life
three ways
fast and hard
too late to see the sunrise
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Re: fake shrubbery 110504
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 12:52:46 AM AEST
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| You have a great talent! |
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Re: fake shrubbery 110504
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by wray on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 03:09:24 AM AEST
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Interesting in an odd kinda way. Give us a hint next time what you're talking about lol.
I'm always too late to see the sunrise :( |
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Re: fake shrubbery 110504
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by kimi on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 06:11:13 PM AEST
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i really like this, it has my kind of randomness that i don't normally reveal to other people! it's good in that it isn't 'laid on a plate' yet is reasonably simple to understand (or maybe that's just me...!)
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