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*J*
Contributed by
Gothik_Twitch
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Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 11:57:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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When your fingertips graze mine
its like magickal extacy is being flushed throughout my body
When our lips meet i feel myself melt against you
When i grasp you close to me , my heart beats faster
and when i look into your eyes, its hard for me not to look away
here i am in love with your characteristics
the personality of a kind knight in shinnnign armour
the knight from a book i wrote
Fantasy is ann odd thing, it can be both good and bad
Why is it that i crave you soo much
when your lyaing in your bed thinking of someone else.
someone you love and wish loved you back.
When we have sex, are we making love?
Or do your just need some action every now and again.
I love you for more then sexy you know?
And yet when you touch me, electricity burns my pale flesh
its then we are almost to close for comfort.
The time where you can read me and know excatly how i feel
Just thinking about your romance gives me static
do you feel static when you think of her?
Attachment is worse then velcro, worse then stitches
its like a severe pain growing in your heart when you see him talking to another
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Re: *J*
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by bleeding_chains on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 12:36:51 PM AEST
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| this is a good write. |
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Re: *J*
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by reilt on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 01:09:10 PM AEST
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| a really good write. i enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: *J*
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 02:22:53 PM AEST
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ditto on that wishing note, wish i would have written something like this... beautiful imagery, take care... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: *J*
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 03:25:43 PM AEST
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oi... reminds me of my ex... he is a J too...
*yells at you not to remind me* lol just kidding.
good write. :) |
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Re: *J*
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by deadbloodyrose on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:39:26 PM AEST
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| you've captured the pain wonderfully in your words... love is pain... pain is love... AMI JO |
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