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Another Day in Hell
Contributed by
Sandrita
on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 12:57:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Another day in hell,
that's what its like to me.
Its like living without air,
I feel like I can't breathe.
Its like living without sunshine,
without you my world is dark.
I'm blind and I can't see
even though I try so hard.
I'm living without water
and for you my body thirsts.
All the liquid here is tears
showing just how much I hurt.
I feel my body dying,
because without you I am dead.
I think and do nothing else
because you take over my head.
So come give me what I need
so I can live a normal life.
Your love is all you'll have to give,
'cause its what I need to survive.
Copyright ©
Sandrita
... [
2004-05-11 12:57:13]
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Re: Another Day in Hell
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by loopylou on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 01:26:11 PM AEST
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| wow i liked this u cldnt of put it more simpley very good |
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Re: Another Day in Hell
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 02:09:05 PM AEST
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i remember writing like this, always a slew of analogies to describe that feeling of "damn i miss you1" ... and oh what a lovely feeling it is to write like this, great writing! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Another Day in Hell
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 02:16:20 PM AEST
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| I admit I too feel like that somtimes, yet I find peace in a great song and true friends even when I don't see them often. |
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Re: Another Day in Hell
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by saha on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 03:11:55 PM AEST
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| very well written, I know how you feel ..... :/ Sandra |
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