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~Dream~
Contributed by
jackee_line
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Monday, 7th October 2002 @ 10:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I dream of you so close to me
I feel your body next to me
I open my eyes and what do I see?
Unfortunately, it's just me
I hear the door, I hear the phone,I ask myself...Oh! it's just me.
I can't deny these feelings in me
It makes me want to jump with glee
For one day as you will see
We will be together you and me.
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2002-10-07 10:15:00]
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Re: ~Dream~
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by Lovingangel4u on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 05:14:38 PM AEST
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I know the feeling.. :( Good Write.
TakeCare,
Carmen |
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Re: ~Dream~
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2003 @ 04:12:31 PM AEST
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| dreams are a wonderful place to find inspiration nice write |
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Re: ~Dream~
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by deadxtired on
Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 03:49:00 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this.
Great write! |
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Re: ~Dream~
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by thepos on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 01:36:16 PM AEST
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| nice poem. Though I think you used the word "me" too much. |
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