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You're the one
Contributed by
pyrochick
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Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 07:01:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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you're the one
that makes me wake up in the morning
you're the one
that makes me open my eyes
you're the one
that gets me going
you're the one
that i think of at night
but how can i
get you to know that im here
how can i
get you to know what i feel
i want to be the one
that wakes up in you're arms
i want to be the one
you think of before you shut your eyes
i want to be the one
you can run to in troubled times
thats who i want to be
but i know thats not reality
i'm just a girl you see
passing you in the halls
all i want
is to be the one
you love
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2004-05-11 19:01:51]
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Re: You're the one
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by liquidsunshine on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 07:18:37 PM AEST
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Ahh, yes. I know the feeling all too well. Then after this, I'll get the door of opportunity to open wide, wait til it's almost closed, squeeze through and finally the doorknob hits me in the rear as it all comes to an end.
Hope your luck is better than mine.
Great write, very effective word choice
Bravo and encore
Love,
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