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Looking
Contributed by
lifefliesby
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Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 08:44:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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I see no end to all my loses
And no love or hate in sight
I feel no touch or kisses soften
Still yet I feel no spite
I get no hugs or flirting nudges
And no winks or smiles
I see only endless budges
And no love for miles
No one there to with countless feeling
Twords me and all my friends
I want her to love me for me
With no forks or bends
I have no one to hold so tight
That we appear as one
One who loves with all her might
Who will be that someone?
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Re: Looking
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 09:00:20 PM AEST
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| I know how you feel and I hope things work out for you. |
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Re: Looking
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by TheVoice on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 09:45:40 PM AEST
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GREAT WRITE
THE VOICE
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Re: Looking
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by starlight4215 on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 09:58:34 PM AEST
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| No matter how down hearted we feel at times. We all have a soul mate... may you find yours... ~ Star |
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Re: Looking
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by n2dep2care on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 11:12:52 PM AEST
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I felt this poem in the deepest part of my heart. I can relate to the pain and longing- I suppose many of us can. This single line:
"I have no one to hold so tight
That we appear as one"
Says it all. Beautiful and strong write.
Laurie
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Re: Looking
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by liquidsunshine on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 07:46:26 PM AEST
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Aww, I love ya, pal. You know that.
I can relate to the feeling of wanting/needing someone... a lot... but...
Que sera sera, right?
Love forever and always,
Chels |
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