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Warring Peace
Contributed by
essentially9
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Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 10:36:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Warring Peace
Much of my thinking
Has been indirect
Much of my feeling
Has been direct
Which is killing me
At this moment
But it's not stopping me
From committing suicide
Of the mind and soul
And leaving death
To time's worth
But right now
Nothing matters to me
And I doubt if it shall be
Ever again, for it's useless
Because in the end
It's completely pointless
My indirectness and directness
Are battling for indecisive action
And I fear too much
Which will win and rule
Everything about me
Because one wrong thing
Can escalate to many
The causalities of this war
Will be costly
But the peace started it
And war will finish it
Much of everything
Will turn into nothing
Copyright ©
essentially9
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2004-05-11 22:36:35]
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Re: Warring Peace
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by UnfallenTears on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 10:46:13 PM AEST
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| I like this, it is very good. Makes you think a lot about yourself. Thanks for sharing, this was really good. |
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Re: Warring Peace
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by wray on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 08:25:49 PM AEST
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| I appreciate your style but something about this piece doesn't sit right with me. It's almost like the words come at you bluntly but they're too difficult to find any meaning in them... |
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Re: Warring Peace
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 01:06:26 PM AEST
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| It was odd to see this one with comments wanted at top..But like Me we both have changed about comments lately..This write is another very good one kitten..Your piece here really can speak if some people listen.. |
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