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My Life, Your Loss
Contributed by
GoodVillain
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Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 11:05:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I wake up in a world of my own
I love the smell of the flesh
Shes screaming to me, no
But I cut through her like mesh
Shes lifeless in the eyes of others
Yet shes the excitement in mine
I take pleasure in the deadly oders
Ill keep her forever in my mind
Later that night ill feast on her
The bones and remains ill burn
Never forgetting her last slur
Dont laugh, it could be your turn
Copyright ©
GoodVillain
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2004-05-11 23:05:40]
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Re: My Life, Your Loss
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by XxPerfectlySanexX on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:27:58 PM AEST
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Nice - A change from alot of the poetry on here.
Kinda makes you cringe half way through though, I have to admit! Hehe.
Keep up the dark writing!
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Re: My Life, Your Loss
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by PsychoticDreamz on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 09:25:36 PM AEST
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Wonderful flow of wording..and pain..and gore
I especially like the first stanza...But all around beautiful..cya
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