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Dragon Flight
Contributed by
TheRaven
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Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 11:29:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Living alone, tattooing the world at will.
Intimidating, too much for them to
Comprehend. Shadows overwhelming
The sun, fierce outline in the sky
Causes chaos, like someone with a
Contagious sickness. My eloquence
Cannot be understood, like an autistic
Child I retreat, continuing the hope,
The everlasting journey for a friend.
-The Raven
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2004-05-11 23:29:31]
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Re: Dragon Flight
(User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 08:38:19 AM AEST
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| i like this. short but sweet as they say. have you ever thought of adding more to it? great write. phil xxx |
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Re: Dragon Flight
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by arden on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 10:42:38 AM AEST
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i like this as is, dont change a thing. a very sad and emotional wirte. very well done. i enjoyed it greatly.
Arden |
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Re: Dragon Flight
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by shelby on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 12:41:55 AM AEST
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volumes come through this piece its splendid!
Michelle |
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Re: Dragon Flight
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 03:18:15 PM AEST
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| VERY CAPTIVATING WRITE- I LOVE IT- KEEP IT UP |
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