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Day and Night
Contributed by
bluoreo
on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:19:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Forever the beauty of the morning sun
Forever the beauty of the rivers run
Forever the beauty of the wind blows
Forever the beauty of the trees grow
Forever the beauty of my gentle smile
Forever the beauty of my unique style
Forever the beauty of my humble core
Forever the beauty of my wings soar
Forever the beauty of the dark coast
Forever the beauty of the evening ghost
Forever the beauty of the ending day
Forever the beauty of the night shade
Forever the beauty of my eyes see
Forever the beauty of my heart bleeds
Forever the beauty of my daily sin
Forever the beauty of my sudden end
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2004-05-12 05:19:52]
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Re: Day and Night
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by Chrissylee on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:25:38 AM AEST
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| lovely flow of ryming you used in this one and i think the title should be forever but thats just my opinion great write though |
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Re: Day and Night
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:33:07 AM AEST
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for ever the beauty of your smile
for ever the beauty of your rhyme..
....you can flurish for ever..venkat |
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Re: Day and Night
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:53:41 AM AEST
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| brilliant flow and rthme in this. good write. phil xxx |
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