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how do you know
Contributed by
innerbeautyqueen
on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 04:53:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
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slowly, so quiet, tensely inside
hiding beneath these forsaken eyes
smiling as seen
quietly i whisper
how do you know
my smile is mendacious
how do you know
you smile back at me and i see it inside
numbness subsides
crying and screaming
you rage for help yet no one else sees
you look deeply at me and know what i am
the cuts are now deeper
the longer we stand
from this reality i ran
i wish to do so now
but my feet do not turn
you still remain
why do you linger
our conversation's prolonged
how do you know
i'll stay here by you
how do you know
i have a feeling
you are me
how do you know
you always know
i know you as well
look what you've done now
you've made me alive
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Re: how do you know
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by honeyrain on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 04:58:59 PM AEST
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what r u talking about your poem doesn't doesn't suck it was good.
favorite linez:
from this reality i ran
i wish to do so now
but my feet do not turn
you still remain
why do you linger
our conversation's prolonged |
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Re: how do you know
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by burdened on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:33:42 PM AEST
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spot poetry is the best poetry.
it shows the most raw emotion, without getting too..."literaturey"
it love this poem.
how should i put it...
it "spoke" to me. |
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Re: how do you know
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:36:09 PM AEST
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| thanks |
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Re: how do you know
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:40:35 PM AEST
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| if this is on the spot I'd love to read somthing you've taken your time with because this is good, so somthing with more thought would probobly be fantastic! |
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