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** Sliding Fun **
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 08:15:17 PM in AEST
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Climbing up the hill
crazy carpet in hand,
tripped over a rock
man oh man,
I grabbed ahold of your hand,
finished going up the hill,
we both went down together,
it was a thrill.
Laughing and having fun,
playtime has just begun.
Lying on my stomach
on my back you jumped,
hang on tight
little one,
here comes a big bump.
Big bump gone
and so were you,
you bounced
right off my back,
didn't hold on
tight enough,
did you?
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Feb.22/2003
Copyright ©
Cynthia
... [
2004-05-12 20:15:17]
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Re: ** Sliding Fun **
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 08:18:30 PM AEST
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I bet this was a blast. The kids and I used to do that when we lived in Colorado. Goodness I miss those times.
Rita |
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Re: ** Sliding Fun **
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 08:55:17 PM AEST
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awwww cute! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: ** Sliding Fun **
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 09:13:50 PM AEST
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| I remember those days. People go sleding in Okinawa too, but since it's a tropical island there is no snow. They use cardboard boxes and slide down the side of hills. It's pretty cool to watch. |
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Re: ** Sliding Fun **
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 09:16:24 PM AEST
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Oh Cynthia..I can only imagine the fun you had..... Maybe someday I'll experience that....
Lovely write.
Hope Hubby is getting better..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: ** Sliding Fun **
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by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 09:56:27 PM AEST
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Awww, this is sweet . . .
Gotta love those little memories . . . you managed to deftly and vividly capture them within this poem, and that's quite laudable a feat.
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Re: ** Sliding Fun **
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by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 10:07:25 PM AEST
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I LOVE IT WHEN PARENTS SPEND TIME WITH THEIR CHILDREN! CUTE POEM & A GREAT MOMMY YOU ARE CYNTHIA!!
LOL-DAN!!! |
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Re: ** Sliding Fun **
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by venkat on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 12:09:12 AM AEST
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| Ooh..very pleasant write.. venkat |
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Re: ** Sliding Fun **
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by emystar on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 07:32:31 PM AEST
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Awesome, nice write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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