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good-bye
Contributed by
shorty_52
on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 08:51:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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as i look into his eyes one tear rolls down my cheek.
leaving a trail of all the lies that i should never take.
i turn around and face the street.
he said he was sorry i said no your not he lied so many times or though i thought.
they are my best friends i've known them long so i'd take their word against your own.
i'm honestly sorry that i a must say this to your face.
we are over i didn't want it this way i like you a lot but i can't stand to be played.
i turn around with a few more tears i try to walk and wipe away my fears.
before i leave i say a few words and what i say is Good-bye.
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Re: good-bye
(User Rating: 1 ) by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 09:32:35 PM AEST (User
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Short, simple, succinct . . . yet with a few lines that just knock you down and leave you staring, amazed and impressed.
"leaving a trail
of all the lies
that i should never take"
--THAT is what poetry ought to be.
Well done.
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