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Undisclosed Reasons
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
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Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 09:41:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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"Undisclosed Reasons"
I wont tell you
Nor ask you
My feelings for everything
You and beneath you
My heart is sinking, slowly but surely
My feelings are overpowering
Strict, I cant feel anything
I wanna get crazy
Have no feeling, almost makes it unappealing
You laugh at thoughts
That I throw out and sound far fetched
You have this look thats unruly
I rebuff the thought
Of uncontrollable tryst
I want it badly so badly it hurts
I have no reason
For this treason
I wanna run away
Far away without you
I have this dream
That me and you will be together
Undisturbed and forever
If only this was understood and sure of
Im sorry for not being there in the beginning
For you to help
But my life has been going good now
I feel Im happy some how
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Re: Undisclosed Reasons
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by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 09:45:25 PM AEST
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This has a very raw, emotional, almost desparate quality to it . . . it's powerful and nicely written.
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Re: Undisclosed Reasons
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 11:11:39 PM AEST
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I agree, this poem is a very emotional outlet.
I connected with you on this one. great poem! |
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