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a simpler life
Contributed by
Black13
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Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 11:40:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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My body aches to feel your caressing fingertips.
Your gentle kisses melt my soul with breathtaking grace.
Eyes chant sublimely of love to my essence.
Your voice speaks to me in sweetest Spanish lullaby.
Mi amor sings to me like a warm Summer's breeze.
We dance together embracing in the rain.
Our laughter fills the skies revealing the stars and moon.
Always dined by candlelight divinely enraptured by one another.
Making wishes on hopes yet staying simple and pure together.
Dreaming together that we would outlast time itself.
Binding ourselves eternally to one another in spirit's embrace.
Mountains may crumble and oceans may dry but true love is eternal.
Copyright ©
Black13
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2004-05-12 23:40:21]
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Re: a simpler life
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by Freakazoid on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 11:45:13 PM AEST
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Love it its true but love may be everything but it can also mean torture just like life but sooner or later everything comes to and end but who knows this just might be good....keep it up
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Re: a simpler life
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 11:47:40 PM AEST
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We can only hope it comes again. This is exquisitely beautiful. You do have a way with words, sir.
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Re: a simpler life
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by arden on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 11:51:18 PM AEST
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this was very beautiful black.
im very impressed by this write.
well done.
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Re: a simpler life
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 11:53:45 PM AEST
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| Absolutely beautiful.. venkat |
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Re: a simpler life
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 12:06:38 AM AEST
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exquisite, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: a simpler life
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 09:26:53 AM AEST
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You have captured the essence of the one thing we all want. It isn't even really true love, but rather eternal intimacy with the one whose reflection is found in your own eyes. We're all looking for the piece of the puzzle that fits perfectly with the wounds in our own soul. Goodness, you have me rambling. Let's say I find this a very intriguing and obviously inspiring write. You have captured the universal human longing for oneness with another.
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Re: a simpler life
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 06:42:23 PM AEST
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hey man, we've all been here before.
This flows so beauitfuly, it's full of emotion too. This is one of your best. |
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Re: a simpler life
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by ShadowDaughter on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 11:52:14 AM AEST
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*smiles*
Sweet, beautiful, touching, romantic . . . love poetry at its finest. Nice job.
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Re: a simpler life
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by JennyFruFru on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 12:49:45 AM AEST
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| this is beautiful... i like the spanish lullabye and the mi amor... its so lovely and gave me goosebumps of happiness... true love my friend is a true gift from God... and you have described it so well...... |
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Re: a simpler life
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 09:16:48 AM AEST
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| this is gorgeous... |
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