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Sorrows Pond
Contributed by
cammy
on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 05:49:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Seasons passed,
Cold breezes lurk,
Death at my fingertips,
Darkness consuming my life,
Poison on my lips.
Stripped of feeling,
Torn from happiness,
Always on the edge,
Hatred overtaking,
As I stand on the ledge.
Ready to swallow,
Ready to jump,
Caressing the knife,
Stabbing in my heart,
Ending my life.
Blood drips down,
Making a pond of despair,
Forgetting the sorrow,
Leaving this cruel world,
Will I be remembered tomorrow?
Copyright ©
cammy
... [
2004-05-13 05:49:44]
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Re: Sorrows Pond
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by venkat on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 06:02:51 AM AEST
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| thoughts expressed with exact use of words ..dark and chilling.. venkat |
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Re: Sorrows Pond
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by Loyalist on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 06:04:13 AM AEST
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Very dark and suicidal.
To the point.
There's no beating around the bush here!
I like dark poems.
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Re: Sorrows Pond
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 06:54:49 PM AEST
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| I dont often read dark poetry.. this is heavy... but a good read |
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