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Gone
Contributed by
Al_obotomize
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Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 09:15:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You, the love of my life
i treated you well
once you got bored
you sent me to hell
I cried and I cried
thinking of you
I wish that I'd die
as our love did too
a girl that I loved
that I once adored
when I needed a hug
you would just slam the door
I called you a princess
you wouldn't call me at all
you hated my guts
and to you I'd crawl
I was in love
you didn't care
you treated me like *****
till this day, I can't bear
the fact that your love
was blind and cold blooded
because of you
in tears my eyes are flooded
and it hurt so much
remembering the past
my one and only love
forgot me in a flash
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Al_obotomize
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2004-05-13 09:15:36]
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Re: Gone
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by emystar on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 10:09:13 AM AEST
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Sad but written well.
It's a bummer when it turns out this way, huh?
I certainly understand your feelings.
luv, huggs,
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Re: Gone
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by DirtyFool on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 11:15:59 AM AEST
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I can relate to this. It is a very good poem. I liked it
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