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Barbed Wire Lips
Contributed by
bleeding_chains
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Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 12:21:23 PM in AEST
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Your lips are like barbed wire
A place where I go to shred my life
A place where I go to die
If I look closely
I can see droplets of my dried blood
Clinging on the sharp dirty wire
Like bleeding icicles
Hanging on for dear life
Lips like safety pins
Piercing my tongue
I choke on my own crimson fluid
Your smile so deathly
A smile that hurts me
With lips like barbed wire
A place where I go to shred my life
A place where I go to die
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bleeding_chains
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2004-05-13 12:21:23]
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Re: Barbed Wire Lips
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 12:30:11 PM AEST
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*wow*
this is very powerful stuff!
i hope you feel better soon.
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Re: Barbed Wire Lips
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by XxPerfectlySanexX on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 12:32:47 PM AEST
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Nice poem - An interesting and well described write!
Take care,
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Re: Barbed Wire Lips
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 01:01:19 PM AEST
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| good write, i like the way you use two of the same lines at the start and the end. good write. phil xxx |
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