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Her Eyes
Contributed by
Chicken
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Tuesday, 8th October 2002 @ 06:50:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Her eyes are beautiful
They shine like the snow.
They are my refuge
They give me a place to go.
And if ever I'm in need
They're right here beside me.
When I'm blind
They help me to see.
Her eyes offer the only escape
That I have ever known.
Because I'm just a fake
That everyone leaves alone.
Copyright ©
Chicken
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2002-10-08 06:50:00]
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Re: Her Eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by XXXsilvervoodooXXX on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 01:40:44 PM AEST
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| beautiful work.. good job |
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Re: Her Eyes
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by inlovewithaladd on
Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 02:08:41 PM AEST
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| i liked this, though the rhyming seems a bit forced at times. |
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