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Moved On
Contributed by
XxPerfectlySanexX
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Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 04:39:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Years and years you put me through pain,
Strength was all I needed to gain,
Finally things are over and my depression is no longer here,
**** you and the old words you said, my dear,
Before I was just a messed up girl because of you,
Don't worry "babe", I hate you too,
Why is it things are always hidden till the very end,
Finally my ****** up head is begining to mend,
I wish I had done this before I told you all I felt,
Before you started to break my heart and let the love melt,
Laughing at you is all I tend to do,
Craveing to murder passes my mind too,
Moving on from you was the best thing to do,
Because now i've got to know the real you.
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Re: Moved On
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by lilch4ever on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 04:43:10 PM AEST
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| Really liked this poem. It shows real character. Glad things are better for ya. Nicely written. |
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Re: Moved On
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by honeyrain on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 05:09:20 PM AEST
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Another beautiful poem ah,u got me laughin on one line.but i could see he treated u bad.sorry.but i loved da poem
Favorite linez:
Laughing at you is all I tend to do,
Craveing to murder passes my mind too,
Moving on from you was the best thing to do,
Because now i've got to know the real you.
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Re: Moved On
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by NirvanaLotus on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:21:15 PM AEST
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| you tell him babe :) I have a very large dislike for ass hole X's |
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