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Dancing My Heart Away
Contributed by
mysticaldancer
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Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 06:38:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The most comfortable place for me to be
Is on the stage
Dancing my heart away.
Wandering here, wandering there,
Graceful as a butterfly
Flying in the air.
No one can I see,
Staring back at me.
For in my mind,
The people have all gone.
No more sound of scuffling feet.
Rustling curtains become still.
No longer are all the smells of the theater
Vivid in my mind.
All noise from backstage is gone.
The little girls
Who are usually giggling,
Are now quiet,
As they watch,
In awe of what they see.
As I start to dance,
I feel the wooden floor
Creaking beneath my feet.
Now I feel at home,
Now I can be me --
Now I am on stage.
Dancing my heart away.
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Re: Dancing My Heart Away
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:31:56 PM AEST
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| this is really good! Wonderfully done! |
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Re: Dancing My Heart Away
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by UnfallenTears on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 09:26:49 PM AEST
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| Meg, this is really good. I like the imagery in it. (and no, I didn't mean for you to cry twice!) |
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Re: Dancing My Heart Away
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by reprobate on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 02:54:03 AM AEST
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nice
anybody who has been near a stage, should enjoy this...whether a seasoned veteren or the little one just learning to tie the ribbons on the slippers.
thaks for sharing |
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Re: Dancing My Heart Away
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by arden on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 11:41:33 AM AEST
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a very beautiful poem. nicely written and expressed.
nicely done, i enjoyed it. :)
Arden |
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Re: Dancing My Heart Away
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by Kachina on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 08:16:14 PM AEST
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| Thanks for commenting on my poem. Your's is a really beautiful piece. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more of your poems. |
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