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DARK ~ KISS
Contributed by
AnGeL_M
on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:34:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My fangs of ice can pierce your flesh
like broken glass Tormenting human
souls like demons from their past
As I walk by him not a sound can be heard
I am silent but deadly like the talons of a bird
Slowly I approach him as he gazes into my eyes
I tell him not to look to deeply for they tell
deceitful lies. Yet he does not
care gazing deep into my soul My body starts
to twitch but yet I maintain control
He slowly walks towards me and his talons touch
my face It is only at this time that he reveals his true race
He slowly bares his fangs, My body get a chill
He then moves towards my neck to make his sweet kill
As I feel him touch me my soul is filled with bliss
Then I bare my fangs and we share this dark kiss
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AnGeL_M
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2004-05-13 19:34:16]
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Re: DARK ~ KISS
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by shorty_52 on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:45:49 PM AEST
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o i luv it. it gave me chills. keep up the good work
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Re: DARK ~ KISS
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:56:36 PM AEST
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Darkly delightful. This is great, Angel Girl.
Rita |
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Re: DARK ~ KISS
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:59:06 PM AEST
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| Holy crap!!!!! It figures I'd be reading this one a tnight. Thanks alot sis. *being sarcastic* LOL I loved it!!!!! Love you. Great job. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: DARK ~ KISS
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by ShadowDaughter on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:01:11 PM AEST
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Niiice . . . chilling and creepy and haunting and shiver-inducing with a really awesome ending-- great write.
--Nora |
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Re: DARK ~ KISS
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by JennyFruFru on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:10:37 PM AEST
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| very powerful and chilling......... gotta love those types of kisses :) :) :) haha |
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Re: DARK ~ KISS
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by Rylo on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:31:16 PM AEST
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| This was really great Angel, I told you everyone would like it. You have a very great mind, and I love reading your work. Great job babe. Love ya always Ron. |
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Re: DARK ~ KISS
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:35:26 PM AEST
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Yes I did indeed enjoy it. Brilliant dark write.
I checked out this poem because it was sandwiched between two poems of mine and I'm so glad I did!!! Its awesome, really, good job. :) |
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Re: DARK ~ KISS
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:38:44 PM AEST
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A DARK KISS LURKS FROM YOUR HEART WITH A HISS! VERY DESCRIPTIVE & WHAT A PICTURE IT PAINTS!! NICELY WRITTEN ANGEL!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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Re: DARK ~ KISS
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 09:13:40 PM AEST
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| great write. |
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Re: DARK ~ KISS
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by waos on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 09:26:02 PM AEST
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| wow that was really good. sure shows how the sweetly beautiful things to some people are just as darkly beautiful to others. |
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Re: DARK ~ KISS
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 11:53:42 PM AEST
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I don't remember your black poetry 'Angel M
This one was really spooky even until the end.
I'll have nightmares for sure.
Spooky pen
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consue |
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Re: DARK ~ KISS
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 12:09:20 AM AEST
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oh i love this!! angel! he met his match with you! lmao! hehe hugs n' love nessa
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