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God, I love you
Contributed by
Breezer08
on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 09:25:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The rain is like my savior
It washes away my pain
But the sorrow is still there
God, I hate the rain
The wind eases the cuts
Making me think I haven't sinned
But I can still feel the hurt
God, I hate the wind
The sune makes me smile
Showing me I can have fun
But I know my smile is fake
God, I hate the sun
You make me melf
When you look at me the way you do
And I hope you love me forever
God, do I love you
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Breezer08
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2004-05-13 21:25:18]
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Re: God, I love you
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 09:59:21 PM AEST
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I just loved how you wrote this....
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