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Contributed by
ChicaBug
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Tuesday, 8th October 2002 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I hide inside myself,no where else to turn
I huddle in the darkness,
So afraid to touch the light.
I shrink at the stirring of memories,
All happy ones have been long forgotten,
My only comfort is the blanket of black.
Music slowly seeps in through a crack,
An escape not yet barricaded by icy feelings,
A soft melody of happiness surrounds me,
It's fluidity picks me up,sits me on my feet.
I begin to dance,slowly at first
Afraid to lose myself in it's warmth,
But as I dance I gain confidence.
I spin,I leap,I twirl,
As I shed my blanket of black,
Suddenly I realize the darkness has gone,
and light has taken it's place.
I turn back for a glance, and to thank God
One last time...for this dance.
Copyright ©
ChicaBug
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2002-10-08 08:00:00]
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Re: No Title
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by ginsdance on
Tuesday, 8th October 2002 @ 08:40:19 AM AEST
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Hey AshQ, you forgot to mention that this poem got you invited to the International Society of Poets, that you won Poet of Merit for 2002 and that it also qualified you for Best Poems and Poets of 2002.... ;) I'm glad that I finally got you to start posting stuff on here girl... I've missed reading your poems.. oh yeah, ask Dustin if I can borrow his French workbook... I have seemed to have misplaced mine... again... lol. This is one of my favs of yours... (next time though, don't forget to title it, and select what it goes under... lol) Luv ya girl...
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Re: No Title
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by ChicaBug on
Wednesday, 9th October 2002 @ 12:32:15 PM AEST
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Thanks Ginnie-Gin. Good Friends are always good critics. I would put up more of my recent stuff, but I left my book at my house and can't seem to remember it when I traverse home. Maybe soon.
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Re: No Title
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by ChicaBug on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 12:36:55 AM AEST
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| I would like to hear some feed back on this poem...let me know what you think...Leave it here on the message board or e-mail me at ChicaBug02@aol.com . I love to hear from other poets, whether it's comment, criticism, or just to chat! |
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