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This Night
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
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Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 11:12:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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This Night
By: Danielle
I gave you a call
You were gasping for air
I tell you cmon this isnt fair
You blame me for leaving you
Stranded and alone
You told me Good-Bye
Then threw your phone
It isnt as hard as your pretending to be
So locked up
Trying hard not to give up on me
This night
Was the first night
I truly hated you
This night was the first night
I could have gave up on you
I stuck with you
Pretending I couldnt live without you
I gave you a call
Your were gasping for air
I say wait cmon this isnt fair
This night was the first night
I truly hated you
This night was the first night
I could have gave up on you
This night
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Re: This Night
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 01:06:59 AM AEST
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| I have been here. For me it all worked out because in the end, she called me again. |
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Re: This Night
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 07:30:41 AM AEST
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Sadness follows, but just for a time, and then we move on, remembering not, that last bit of time, that last gasp of breath, because surely you see, the next one will be....the deepest breath of all so far.
Good write, great flow. |
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