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False Love
Contributed by
Dragontear27
on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 01:12:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You looked at me with your glisening eyes
and saw the smile on your face
but i found out you were full of lies
you found somone else to take my place
My heart sunk low into an open grave
i thought you loved me but i was wrong
the emotions i felt were like titdal waves
i felt so bad for way to long
You told me to just forget
that it would get better over time
nothing you said you ever regret
but the pain i felt was like a crime
If you want to forget about me thats fine
lead your life in the glowing sun
step to the good side of things and croos the line
but the feelings i felt are over and done.
Copyright ©
Dragontear27
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2004-05-14 13:12:10]
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Re: False Love
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by DirtyFool on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 01:19:08 PM AEST
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| Wonderful poem. I have felt this way before. I enjoyed it!!! |
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Re: False Love
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by pixie on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 01:41:31 PM AEST
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Great stuff, you have put this across very well, keep it up :O)
Pixie xxxx |
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Re: False Love
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by Black13 on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 02:47:52 PM AEST
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Very nice write.
Powerful words.
Hope things get better in time. |
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Re: False Love
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by Key-holeGolf on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 07:37:26 PM AEST
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HEY! This is kick-ass brilliant! Really useful poetry! Really like
"you told me to just forget
that it would get better over time
nothing you said you ever regret
but the pain i felt was like a crime"
x |
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