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Tear Drop
Contributed by
blue-amy
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Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 03:11:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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You struggle day and night
Never giving up the fight
Holding in the hurt and tears
All the pain from all the years
Your eyes water and strain
No longer can you hold the pain
A tear begins to fall from your eye
You know that you are going to cry
The tear starts to roll down your cheek
Feeling as if you hadnt sleep in a week
It slices as it rolls down your face
As if it was the slowest race
Your face is cut with loves painful teardrop
No matter what the hurt wont stop
At least not until the last tear has fallen
Or another painful memory comes callin
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2004-05-14 15:11:37]
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Re: Tear Drop
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 04:04:50 PM AEST
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NICE WRITE
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Re: Tear Drop
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by alecfernadez on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 04:56:31 PM AEST
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| wow, this is really great! I liked the way you put this together, It really is an emotional read |
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Re: Tear Drop
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by Anesthetic on
Tuesday, 26th February 2008 @ 03:27:03 PM AEST
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That was some amazing write, it really flowed together, which got the emotion across cleanly and really hard hitting. Keep up the good work.
~Charli~ |
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Re: Tear Drop
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by pinkunicornoctober on
Wednesday, 29th September 2010 @ 06:08:54 AM AEST
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| I LOVE this! Very good description! GREAT JOB! |
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