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Murder
Contributed by
Bloodthirsty
on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 06:14:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You stabbed me in the heart
Twisting the blade
Twisting and twisting
Until a bloody hole was made
Suffocated by this so called love
You gave and then you took away
Seeing what you did to me
In the end I will make you pay
Do you enjoy the pain you create
And watching your victums suffocate?
Its not love you give its only hate!!
So I'm going to escape
Before its too late
Copyright ©
Bloodthirsty
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2004-05-14 18:14:43]
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Re: Murder
(User Rating: 1 )
by Cassandra on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 12:03:50 PM AEST
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Ah very good poem. I enjoyed reading it. I thought it was a good poem because for that moment I read it I felt like I was there. Looking forward to your future poems you post on this site. :-)
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